From our first draft of the film, we learnt from audience feedback that there were hardly any story elements what so ever. The audience had no idea what was happening, as all they saw was someone walking somewhere. To fix this we had to add features that would give the audience the idea that this character is going somewhere. We added suggestive newspaper titles, we added a map with the character marking a destination, and we added a mysterious shot using a prop, and this shot connotes "who is he going for next?".
Once this was done, we went to go and get some more feedback, and this is what we have so far on facebook..
(Ignore the bit where it says "the descriptions you should leave them up..." - its referring to YouTube connotations)
So, adding these storyline elements into the opening resulted in better audience reaction.
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